Suffocate, I envelope you
Struggle, you are bound
Awaken, your dream is real
The heart driven to panic
is it danger the body warns?
Doubt says the soul
curious and unsatisfied
Hestitate. Pull away
Run.
Run.
Run.
Distance is unchanged
Rage. Madness becomes you.
Blind, you plunge
Find what astounds you
shock, you are breathless
Feel, ponder.
Soft is the embrace
Breathe me in, sweetest poison
Restrained, but oh! You are free
Exhilarate in your rapture
Forever stay, you belong
Leave. Freedom, it is yours
Realize it not
The chained one is me
And you the captor.
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Love? It is the same demon right?
ReplyDeleteI don't think anything else has the power to articulate so many oxymoron in a single poem!
I loved it buddy, though it is hard to interpret a few lines. Probably you can post the explanation in the comment (or is it better unexplained?)
Is there anything more oxymoron-ish (i make up my own words so yeah) than love? Its joy and its sorrow. Its gratifying, and painful.
ReplyDeleteIn the poem a girl is drowned by feelings. The way crushes feel-suffocating and intoxicating. After timidness and uncertainty she pulls away, only to find that she cant. Sweet is the imprisonment. However freedom is hers. As the slave of love is..well i guess, me. And she is my captor, though it may seem the other way around.
Everyone should fall in love once in their lives. I'm not a classic romantic, not at all. I believe that life is driven by logic and logic alone. But, I know that it's just difficult, too difficult for an ordinary guy like me, to stop.
ReplyDeleteI've had tears of joy in love and I know now!
Go fuck yourself!
ReplyDeletelol. Dnt think i dnt know who you are.
ReplyDeleteAs much as I'd like to have sexual intercourse with myself, I choose not to.
Fuck off!
ReplyDeleteThis is the fun thing with allowing anonymous users to comment. hahahaha, thanks mr.anonymous you certainly brighten my day.
ReplyDeleteI'd hug you and kiss you in person ya know XD
ReplyDeleteyeah once a bitch always a bitch.
ReplyDeleteU do realize u're not making any sense. U could atleast insult me in some way. For example you can say : Yen you're so fucking ugly. or you can say : Hey asshole, your poem sucks.
ReplyDelete"Go fuck yourself", "fuck off", and "yeah once a bitch always a bitch" kinda shows how you dnt have anything to say to me. Have a bit of substance when you're trying to hurt people. Otherwise you look so uncreative. Sorry, but Im serious. I cant even feel hatred for you if you dnt even know why you dnt like me in the first place. C'mon, I know you can do better. ^^
Got no point? U sucks Bitch!
ReplyDeleteNope. still not good enough sorry.
ReplyDeleteHate! One of the finest of all feelings! Fine 'cuz it sticks, it never leaves no matter what! You're lucky Azrin to have such faithful haters for yourself ... I'm envious!
ReplyDeleteHere's something I wrote on hate long time back - http://lifegerms.blogspot.com/2008/05/join-me-in-hell.html
Very nice point there. Im goin out now, will check it out first thing back.
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